This looks very good. I wouldn¹t change any of the ³words² in the slides. I¹m wondering if there need to be some words on OGSA compliance (for those claiming such thing), or maybe that¹s for another day.... -- Chris On 26/2/08 15:13, "David Snelling" <david.snelling@uk.fujitsu.com> wrote:

Folks,

I had an action to create some text for use in clarifying the relationship between OGF and OGSA. Here are the slides (including these words) that we settled on in the meeting today. There is a suggestion that we add these words to the OGSA charter page, include them in the OGSA primer, and pass them to the OGF marketing function for use in their messaging.

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Hi David, Recognizing that I'm a bit late with this input and that I am a true "lurker" in this group :), one suggestion would be to add a few more words as a sub-bullet to the last bullet on the "Words, Words, Words..." slide (#3) giving some examples of important activities of the OGF that are outside the OGSA. As it stands, the explanation is perfectly understandable...for "outsiders" like me, however, a little clarification on that last point would be helpful. Cheers, BobN ________________________________ From: ogsa-wg-bounces@ogf.org [mailto:ogsa-wg-bounces@ogf.org] On Behalf Of David Snelling Sent: Tuesday, February 26, 2008 6:14 PM To: OGSA ML Subject: [ogsa-wg] Relationship between OGF and OGSA Folks, I had an action to create some text for use in clarifying the relationship between OGF and OGSA. Here are the slides (including these words) that we settled on in the meeting today. There is a suggestion that we add these words to the OGSA charter page, include them in the OGSA primer, and pass them to the OGF marketing function for use in their messaging. -- Take care: Dr. David Snelling < David . Snelling . UK . Fujitsu . com

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