Hi David,
 
Recognizing that I'm a bit late with this input and that I am a true "lurker" in this group :), one suggestion would be to add a few more words as a sub-bullet to the last bullet on the "Words, Words, Words..." slide (#3) giving some examples of important activities of the OGF that are outside the OGSA.
 
As it stands, the explanation is perfectly understandable...for "outsiders" like me, however, a little clarification on that last point would be helpful.
 
Cheers,
BobN


From: ogsa-wg-bounces@ogf.org [mailto:ogsa-wg-bounces@ogf.org] On Behalf Of David Snelling
Sent: Tuesday, February 26, 2008 6:14 PM
To: OGSA ML
Subject: [ogsa-wg] Relationship between OGF and OGSA

Folks,

I had an action to create some text for use in clarifying the relationship between OGF and OGSA. Here are the slides (including these words) that we settled on in the meeting today. There is a suggestion that we add these words to the OGSA charter page, include them in the OGSA primer, and pass them to the OGF marketing function for use in their messaging.

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