The OGF Technology Strategy Committee have produced a draft strategy document for the OGF as a whole. None of the data area directors or co-chairs are listed among the authors and I think the document needs some remedial attention in the data area. The document is now in public comment so we have very little time to catch problems. I've had look through and have listed the changes I think are needed. I attach these as a text file. Please take a look and let me know what you think. Should we submit some of these on behalf of the OGSA Data WG? (A couple of my comments lie outwith the data area. I've put these in parentheses and would not include them in any response from the group as a whole). Best wishes, Dave Berry Deputy Director, Research & E-infrastructure Development National e-Science Centre, 15 South College Street Edinburgh, EH8 9AA Tel: +44 131 651 4039