Final round of comments for Use case and req. document before submission

Hi all, I would like to encourage you all to have a look at our first deliverable 'Requirements and Use Cases for a Cloud API'. I would ask to send you comments, ideas and thoughts by Friday. The document can be found here: http://forge.ogf.org/sf/go/doc15732 Friday is not a 'real' deadline. But I will submit it into the OGF editor pipeline on Friday. Then it will go into a public review - after that it will be released as our first informal document. All the best, -Thijs -- Thijs Metsch Tel: +49 (0)941 3075-122 (x60122) http://blogs.sun.com/intheclouds http://www.twitter.com/befreax Software Engineer Cloud, Grid and Virtualization Sun Microsystems GmbH Dr.-Leo-Ritter-Str. 7 mailto:thijs.metsch@sun.com D-93049 Regensburg http://www.sun.com

a new version is available via occi-wg.org or the link below... Cheers, -Thijs On Mon, 2009-09-07 at 16:14 +0200, Thijs Metsch wrote:
Hi all,
I would like to encourage you all to have a look at our first deliverable 'Requirements and Use Cases for a Cloud API'. I would ask to send you comments, ideas and thoughts by Friday. The document can be found here:
http://forge.ogf.org/sf/go/doc15732
Friday is not a 'real' deadline. But I will submit it into the OGF editor pipeline on Friday. Then it will go into a public review - after that it will be released as our first informal document.
All the best,
-Thijs
-- Thijs Metsch Tel: +49 (0)941 3075-122 (x60122) http://blogs.sun.com/intheclouds http://www.twitter.com/befreax Software Engineer Cloud, Grid and Virtualization Sun Microsystems GmbH Dr.-Leo-Ritter-Str. 7 mailto:thijs.metsch@sun.com D-93049 Regensburg http://www.sun.com

Thanks, comment will follow today. Does anyone know how to add line numbers to the docs for editing and commenting purposes ? -gary Thijs Metsch wrote:
a new version is available via occi-wg.org or the link below...
Cheers,
-Thijs
On Mon, 2009-09-07 at 16:14 +0200, Thijs Metsch wrote:
Hi all,
I would like to encourage you all to have a look at our first deliverable 'Requirements and Use Cases for a Cloud API'. I would ask to send you comments, ideas and thoughts by Friday. The document can be found here:
http://forge.ogf.org/sf/go/doc15732
Friday is not a 'real' deadline. But I will submit it into the OGF editor pipeline on Friday. Then it will go into a public review - after that it will be released as our first informal document.
All the best,
-Thijs

On Tue, Sep 8, 2009 at 5:22 PM, Gary Mazz <garymazzaferro@gmail.com> wrote:
Thanks, comment will follow today.
Does anyone know how to add line numbers to the docs for editing and commenting purposes ?
I'm not sure but it is something I've thought about. There was a great web annotation <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Web_annotation> system for GPLv3 called stet <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stet_(software)> but it's now dead and they recommend co-ment.net instead (which barfed on the DocBook I fed it). Marginalia <http://www.geof.net/code/annotation/> looks pretty cool too but what would be amazing is a system like the one we're using for the HTML 5 Working Drafts <http://www.whatwg.org/specs/web-apps/current-work/> which posts directly to BugZilla. Sam Thijs Metsch wrote:
a new version is available via occi-wg.org or the link below...
Cheers,
-Thijs
On Mon, 2009-09-07 at 16:14 +0200, Thijs Metsch wrote:
Hi all,
I would like to encourage you all to have a look at our first deliverable 'Requirements and Use Cases for a Cloud API'. I would ask to send you comments, ideas and thoughts by Friday. The document can be found here:
http://forge.ogf.org/sf/go/doc15732
Friday is not a 'real' deadline. But I will submit it into the OGF editor pipeline on Friday. Then it will go into a public review - after that it will be released as our first informal document.
All the best,
-Thijs
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It'd be great if we had something like this - I've comments, both my own and comments extracted from the mailing list, that need to be integrated in the context of the specification's content. I don't see any elegant way that DocBook supports this other than an obvious text insertion. Andy andy.edmonds.be On Tue, Sep 8, 2009 at 17:26, Sam Johnston <samj@samj.net> wrote:
On Tue, Sep 8, 2009 at 5:22 PM, Gary Mazz <garymazzaferro@gmail.com>wrote:
Thanks, comment will follow today.
Does anyone know how to add line numbers to the docs for editing and commenting purposes ?
I'm not sure but it is something I've thought about. There was a great web annotation <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Web_annotation> system for GPLv3 called stet <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stet_%28software%29> but it's now dead and they recommend co-ment.net instead (which barfed on the DocBook I fed it). Marginalia <http://www.geof.net/code/annotation/> looks pretty cool too but what would be amazing is a system like the one we're using for the HTML 5 Working Drafts<http://www.whatwg.org/specs/web-apps/current-work/>which posts directly to BugZilla.
Sam
Thijs Metsch wrote:
a new version is available via occi-wg.org or the link below...
Cheers,
-Thijs
On Mon, 2009-09-07 at 16:14 +0200, Thijs Metsch wrote:
Hi all,
I would like to encourage you all to have a look at our first deliverable 'Requirements and Use Cases for a Cloud API'. I would ask to send you comments, ideas and thoughts by Friday. The document can be found here:
http://forge.ogf.org/sf/go/doc15732
Friday is not a 'real' deadline. But I will submit it into the OGF editor pipeline on Friday. Then it will go into a public review - after that it will be released as our first informal document.
All the best,
-Thijs
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On Tue, Sep 8, 2009 at 6:34 PM, Andy Edmonds <andy@edmonds.be> wrote:
It'd be great if we had something like this - I've comments, both my own and comments extracted from the mailing list, that need to be integrated in the context of the specification's content. I don't see any elegant way that DocBook supports this other than an obvious text insertion.
So it turns out that pasting the HTML document into co-ment.net's rich text editor works nicely. My problem then is that we don't want to release a draft and sit on our hands for a month, rather incorporate feedback as we go. Perhaps the best way is to submit a new version weekly (say on Monday) and use it to gather comments in the lead up to and following on from the wednesday calls. The spec is coming along very quickly now I'm 100% devoted to the task and have a decent revision control system - expect to be commenting on it directly. Sam
On Tue, Sep 8, 2009 at 17:26, Sam Johnston <samj@samj.net> wrote:
On Tue, Sep 8, 2009 at 5:22 PM, Gary Mazz <garymazzaferro@gmail.com>wrote:
Thanks, comment will follow today.
Does anyone know how to add line numbers to the docs for editing and commenting purposes ?
I'm not sure but it is something I've thought about. There was a great web annotation <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Web_annotation> system for GPLv3 called stet <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stet_%28software%29> but it's now dead and they recommend co-ment.net instead (which barfed on the DocBook I fed it). Marginalia <http://www.geof.net/code/annotation/>looks pretty cool too but what would be amazing is a system like the one we're using for the HTML 5 Working Drafts<http://www.whatwg.org/specs/web-apps/current-work/>which posts directly to BugZilla.
Sam
Thijs Metsch wrote:
a new version is available via occi-wg.org or the link below...
Cheers,
-Thijs
On Mon, 2009-09-07 at 16:14 +0200, Thijs Metsch wrote:
Hi all,
I would like to encourage you all to have a look at our first deliverable 'Requirements and Use Cases for a Cloud API'. I would ask to send you comments, ideas and thoughts by Friday. The document can be found here:
http://forge.ogf.org/sf/go/doc15732
Friday is not a 'real' deadline. But I will submit it into the OGF editor pipeline on Friday. Then it will go into a public review - after that it will be released as our first informal document.
All the best,
-Thijs
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participants (4)
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Andy Edmonds
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Gary Mazz
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Sam Johnston
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Thijs Metsch