Somehow I miss a some texts highlighting that OCCI in a boundary protocol and can therefore be used for *aaS offerings...Also it should be addressed that we play well with others like Cloud Audit, CDMI and OVF... I can currently only second Andy's comments - those are the same as mine. Most important is the Bibliography sections. The updates for 6.4.2, 6.4.3, 6.4.4, 6.4.8 should be very simple by just adding OCCI in there... Cheers, -Thijs -----Original Message----- From: Edmonds, AndrewX [mailto:andrewx.edmonds@intel.com] Sent: Thu 31.03.2011 13:29 To: Alan Sill Cc: Thijs Metsch Subject: RE: [occi-wg] Fwd: NIST CCSRWG 9th Working Draft for your review and comments Alan, Here are some of my comments relating to this document. I know Thijs is also reviewing the document so rather send off my comments perhaps we can coordinate our replies here. Comments: In 6.4.2 "Use Case: Moving VMs and virtual appliances between Clouds" This is missing the requirement of VM Control. If you can package up your VMs you will still need a common means to provision the resource on the new target cloud provider so those existing packaged VMs can be deployed. In 6.4.3 "Selecting the best IaaS vendor for private externally hosted Cloud" The means to discover available resource types is available in OCCI. There is however no means to discover the performance characteristics of those resources. Likewise for 6.4.8 "Discovering Cloud resources" In 6.4.4 "Portable tools for monitoring and managing Clouds" OCCI's availability should be marked as either "Reference Implementation" (by many parties) or "Testing" There is also a Bibliography section in the document and references to the OCCI v1.1 document series should be added if possible. HTH, Andy From: occi-wg-bounces@ogf.org [mailto:occi-wg-bounces@ogf.org] On Behalf Of Alan Sill Sent: Wednesday, March 30, 2011 8:19 PM To: occi-wg@ogf.org Subject: [occi-wg] Fwd: NIST CCSRWG 9th Working Draft for your review and comments FYI - update to my previous mail - please see new versions and comment form below. PLEASE READ and if possible, respond! Thanks, Alan Begin forwarded message: From: "Sokol, Annie W." <annie.sokol@nist.gov> Date: March 28, 2011 5:18:31 PM CDT To: Multiple recipients of list <cc_standards@nist.gov> Subject: NIST CCSRWG 9th Working Draft for your review and comments Reply-To: "cc_standards@nist.gov" <cc_standards@nist.gov> March 28, 2011 Dear All: As per the timeline below, we are releasing the Ninth Working Draft of the NIST Cloud Computing Standards Roadmap for your review and comments. Please use the attached comment template to submit your comments on or before Monday, April 11, 2011. Both attachments are also available on the Twiki page http://collaborate.nist.gov/twiki-cloud-computing/bin/view/CloudComputing/St andardsRoadmap. We look forward to seeing you at the NIST Cloud Computing Forum and Workshop III, NIST, Gaithersburg, Maryland, April 7 & 8, 2011. VR, Annie Sokol Date Description Due Monday, March 28, 2011 9th Draft posted for NIST CCSRWG 14-day review April 11, 2011 Thursday, April 7, 2011 NO NIST CCSRWG meeting April 7 & 8 , 2011 NIST Cloud Computing Forum & Workshop III Friday, April 8, 2011 NIST briefing on work of the NIST CCSRWG based upon 9th draft Monday, April 11, 2011 Comments due on 9th draft Wednesday, April 13, 2011 NIST proposed disposition of comments 9th posted Thursday, April 14, 2011 NIST CCSRWG meeting reviews comment disposition on 9th draft