Somehow I miss a some texts highlighting that OCCI in a boundary protocol and can therefore be used for *aaS offerings...Also it should be addressed that we play well with others like Cloud Audit, CDMI and OVF...
I can currently only second Andy's comments - those are the same as mine. Most important is the Bibliography sections.
The updates for 6.4.2, 6.4.3, 6.4.4, 6.4.8 should be very simple by just adding OCCI in there...
Cheers,
-Thijs
-----Original Message-----
From: Edmonds, AndrewX [mailto:andrewx.edmonds@intel.com]
Sent: Thu 31.03.2011 13:29
To: Alan Sill
Cc: Thijs Metsch
Subject: RE: [occi-wg] Fwd: NIST CCSRWG 9th Working Draft for your review and comments
Alan,
Here are some of my comments relating to this document. I know Thijs is also
reviewing the document so rather send off my comments perhaps we can
coordinate our replies here.
Comments:
In 6.4.2 "Use Case: Moving VMs and virtual appliances between Clouds"
This is missing the requirement of VM Control. If you can package up your
VMs you will still need a common means to provision the resource on the new
target cloud provider so those existing packaged VMs can be deployed.
In 6.4.3 "Selecting the best IaaS vendor for private externally hosted
Cloud"
The means to discover available resource types is available in OCCI. There
is however no means to discover the performance characteristics of those
resources.
Likewise for 6.4.8 "Discovering Cloud resources"
In 6.4.4 "Portable tools for monitoring and managing Clouds"
OCCI's availability should be marked as either "Reference Implementation"
(by many parties) or "Testing"
There is also a Bibliography section in the document and references to the
OCCI v1.1 document series should be added if possible.
HTH,
Andy
From: occi-wg-bounces@ogf.org [mailto:occi-wg-bounces@ogf.org] On Behalf Of
Alan Sill
Sent: Wednesday, March 30, 2011 8:19 PM
To: occi-wg@ogf.org
Subject: [occi-wg] Fwd: NIST CCSRWG 9th Working Draft for your review and
comments
FYI - update to my previous mail - please see new versions and comment form
below.
PLEASE READ and if possible, respond!
Thanks,
Alan
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From: "Sokol, Annie W." <annie.sokol@nist.gov>
Date: March 28, 2011 5:18:31 PM CDT
To: Multiple recipients of list <cc_standards@nist.gov>
Subject: NIST CCSRWG 9th Working Draft for your review and comments
Reply-To: "cc_standards@nist.gov" <cc_standards@nist.gov>
March 28, 2011
Dear All:
As per the timeline below, we are releasing the Ninth Working Draft of the
NIST Cloud Computing Standards Roadmap for your review and comments. Please
use the attached comment template to submit your comments on or before
Monday, April 11, 2011. Both attachments are also available on the Twiki
page
http://collaborate.nist.gov/twiki-cloud-computing/bin/view/CloudComputing/St
andardsRoadmap.
We look forward to seeing you at the NIST Cloud Computing Forum and Workshop
III, NIST, Gaithersburg, Maryland, April 7 & 8, 2011.
VR,
Annie Sokol
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9th Draft posted for NIST CCSRWG 14-day review
April 11, 2011
Thursday, April 7, 2011
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April 7 & 8 , 2011
NIST Cloud Computing Forum & Workshop III
Friday, April 8, 2011
NIST briefing on work of the NIST CCSRWG based upon 9th draft
Monday, April 11, 2011
Comments due on 9th draft
Wednesday, April 13, 2011
NIST proposed disposition of comments 9th posted
Thursday, April 14, 2011
NIST CCSRWG meeting reviews comment disposition on 9th draft