[Nsi-wg] NSI DDS draft

Hello John, I have reviewed the NSI DDS draft and added some edits and comments. The latest version (0.4) is uploaded here: https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13423 Could you please take a look and review the comments and make updates as needed? Once this is done we can send to public comment. Guy Guy Roberts PhD Senior Transport Network Architect Tel: +44 (0)1223 371316 Mob: +44 (0)7881 336417 Skype: guy1965 GÉANT Networks • Services • People Learn more at www.geant.org​<http://www.geant.org/> ​GEANT Limited, trading as GÉANT. Registered in England & Wales. Registration Number 2806796. Registered Office – City House, 126-130 Hills Road, Cambridge CB2 1PQ