Hello John,

I have reviewed the NSI DDS draft and added some edits and comments.  The latest version (0.4) is uploaded here:  https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13423

Could you please take a look and review the comments and make updates as needed?

Once this is done we can send to public comment.

Guy

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