Chin, Thanks for these comments and edits. I have accepted edits and uploaded the document here: https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13423 Guy From: Chin Guok [mailto:chin@es.net] Sent: 24 July 2015 23:32 To: Guy Roberts Cc: John MacAuley; nsi-wg@ogf.org; Tomohiro Kudoh (kudoh@nc.u-tokyo.ac.jp) Subject: Re: NSI DDS draft Hi Guy, I made an edit pass on the document and added some stuff for clarification as well as some comments for discussion. Thanks! - Chin Chin Guok NOC: (510) 486-7600 Network Engineer (800) 333-7638 ESnet Network Engineering Group (AS293) Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory On Fri, Jul 24, 2015 at 2:20 AM, Guy Roberts <Guy.Roberts@geant.org<mailto:Guy.Roberts@geant.org>> wrote: John, Thanks for this effort. I will review and open an NSI tracker issue requesting review by Richard in advance of public comment period. Guy From: John MacAuley [mailto:macauley@es.net<mailto:macauley@es.net>] Sent: 24 July 2015 00:40 To: Guy Roberts Cc: nsi-wg@ogf.org<mailto:nsi-wg@ogf.org>; chin@es.net<mailto:chin@es.net>; Tomohiro Kudoh (kudoh@nc.u-tokyo.ac.jp<mailto:kudoh@nc.u-tokyo.ac.jp>) Subject: Re: NSI DDS draft Another update.