Chin,

Thanks for these comments and edits.  I have accepted edits and uploaded the document here:  https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13423

Guy

From: Chin Guok [mailto:chin@es.net]
Sent: 24 July 2015 23:32
To: Guy Roberts
Cc: John MacAuley; nsi-wg@ogf.org; Tomohiro Kudoh (kudoh@nc.u-tokyo.ac.jp)
Subject: Re: NSI DDS draft

Hi Guy,

I made an edit pass on the document and added some stuff for clarification as well as some comments for discussion.

Thanks!

- Chin

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On Fri, Jul 24, 2015 at 2:20 AM, Guy Roberts <Guy.Roberts@geant.org> wrote:

John,

Thanks for this effort.  I will review and open an NSI tracker issue requesting review by Richard in advance of public comment period.

Guy

From: John MacAuley [mailto:macauley@es.net]
Sent: 24 July 2015 00:40
To: Guy Roberts
Cc: nsi-wg@ogf.org; chin@es.net; Tomohiro Kudoh (kudoh@nc.u-tokyo.ac.jp)
Subject: Re: NSI DDS draft

Another update.