Hi all, I added a few small comments to Oscar's version, see attachment. Mischa On Mon, Mar 11, 2013 at 02:41:30PM +0100, Oscar Koeroo wrote:

Hi Jens, et al,

I've attached the latest .docx file with my comments, questions and one proposed correction.

Oscar

On 10-03-13 01:01, Jens Jensen wrote:

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For discussion at OGF37.

https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/159

I made a fairly substantial number of changes, expanding the introduction and background information and rewrote the whole parsing section. I won't claim that it's finished but at least you will have something to talk about :-)

Also, I managed to upload it to the folder twice and I haven't figured out how to get rid of the extra copy.

Anyway, let me know if you think it is sufficiently precise and readable (there's a fine line...) Also, I have tried to keep things slightly VOMS-agnostic as we may have other ACs "for free"

Thanks --jens

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Strange, I wrote it using libreoffice...? Hereby old old-style word and odt versions. Cheers, Mischa On Tue, Apr 09, 2013 at 02:48:09PM +0100, Jens Jensen wrote:

Thanks, Mischa. Word moans that it cannot open the file, do I need to open it with a particular editor? I seem to be able to unzip it and get XML out...

Cheers -j

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On 4 April 2013 18:42, Mischa Salle wrote:

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Hi all,

I added a few small comments to Oscar's version, see attachment.

Mischa

On Mon, Mar 11, 2013 at 02:41:30PM +0100, Oscar Koeroo wrote:

...

Hi Jens, et al,

I've attached the latest .docx file with my comments, questions and one proposed correction.

Oscar

On 10-03-13 01:01, Jens Jensen wrote:

...

For discussion at OGF37.

https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/159

I made a fairly substantial number of changes, expanding the introduction and background information and rewrote the whole parsing section. I won't claim that it's finished but at least you will have something to talk about :-)

Also, I managed to upload it to the folder twice and I haven't figured out how to get rid of the extra copy.

Anyway, let me know if you think it is sufficiently precise and readable (there's a fine line...) Also, I have tried to keep things slightly VOMS-agnostic as we may have other ACs "for free"

Thanks --jens

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On Tue, Apr 09, 2013 at 03:14:05PM +0100, Jens Jensen wrote:

Thanks. Now it works . AFACS it is only the comments that need addressing; there is text which looks like it was changed but I think wasn't? So it may make sense to answer the comments separately rather than cluttering up the document (and of course just edit the text.) I'll try to do that. Ok. Yes, I only added comments, Oscar added more. I just added the comments to Oscar's version.

cheers, Mischa

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Thanks, Mischa. Word moans that it cannot open the file, do I need to open it with a particular editor? I seem to be able to unzip it and get XML out...

Cheers -j

Dr Jens Jensen (0x9210 F006) Rutherford Appleton Laboratory T/F +44 1235 44 6104/6626

On 4 April 2013 18:42, Mischa Salle wrote:

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Hi all,

I added a few small comments to Oscar's version, see attachment.

Mischa

On Mon, Mar 11, 2013 at 02:41:30PM +0100, Oscar Koeroo wrote:

...

Hi Jens, et al,

I've attached the latest .docx file with my comments, questions and one proposed correction.

Oscar

On 10-03-13 01:01, Jens Jensen wrote:

...

For discussion at OGF37.

https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/159

I made a fairly substantial number of changes, expanding the introduction and background information and rewrote the whole parsing section. I won't claim that it's finished but at least you will have something to talk about :-)

Also, I managed to upload it to the folder twice and I haven't

On Tue, Apr 09, 2013 at 02:48:09PM +0100, Jens Jensen wrote: figured

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how to get rid of the extra copy.

Anyway, let me know if you think it is sufficiently precise and readable (there's a fine line...) Also, I have tried to keep things slightly VOMS-agnostic as we may have other ACs "for free"

Thanks --jens

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