- 5i)
The
Introduction distinguishes between Base properties and Differentiated
properties; nevertheless, the "natural language form" part of
the document contains only "Base properties" section and no
"Differentiated properties", all the attributes are described
under Section 3 "Base properties". On the other hand, the
XML representation part lists many of the attributes (starting from
Network) as Differentiated properties in Section 11.
Evaluation: Editor will clarify; in particular,
distinguish/clarify ?Base? vs. ?Differentiated?
properties
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