Hi Steve, sorry again for the late reply! Anyway, I attach a pdf with some suggested changes marked, all minor IMHO (red: removed text, blue: changed text, green: added text, diff style in verbose sections). Please let me know if you want these changes commited, or if I possibly misunderstood parts (again). Otherwise, I think its really ready to go out! Summary of changes: - some formatting (found ^M's which messed things up, some spacing, page break, etc) - added a number of exceptions, refering their syntax to the core spec (e.g. TimeOut, etc) - removed some exeptions, too, as error conditions could never occur, I think. - fixed some inconsistencies (service naming for SAGA services was different in attribs and verbose text, for example) - chaged casing for MUST, SHOULD, etc (was often lowercase where it should have been uppercase, IMHO) - separated suggested SAGA service names for files and directories (a file URL cannot be used for a dir, and vice versa) - added a 'Implementation MAY use saga context attrib names for auth filtering', to clarify that this is not required (auth filter generation may imply otherwise). Many thanks, Andre. Quoting [Steve Fisher] (Dec 05 2008):
Date: Fri, 5 Dec 2008 17:59:12 +0000 From: "Steve Fisher" <dr.s.m.fisher@gmail.com> To: saga-rg@ogf.org Subject: [SAGA-RG] Fwd: Service Discovery spec updated at last ...
Hi,
Unfortunately I have not had any reaction to this. I don't like to assume that silence means that everybody is happy. Perhaps at least a co-chair could look through and give me the go-ahead to resubmit.
Implementation work is due to restart in C++ on Monday and start in Java on the same date.
Steve
---------- Forwarded message ---------- From: Steve Fisher <dr.s.m.fisher@gmail.com> Date: 2008/12/1 Subject: Service Discovery spec updated at last ... To: saga-rg@ogf.org
Hi,
I have finally got the spec updated - please see attached .dvi and .pdf files. Please make any final comments before it goes back to the OGF editors. Work on implementation will resume next week.
Steve -- Nothing is ever easy.