Hi Michaela, thanks for taking the time to make comments. Very much appreciated! Take care, Morris
-- -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- -- Von: pgi-wg-bounces@ogf.org [mailto:pgi-wg-bounces@ogf.org] Im Auftrag von Michaela Barth -- Gesendet: Dienstag, 24. Mai 2011 18:07 -- An: pgi-wg@ogf.org -- Betreff: Re: [Pgi-wg] OGF PGI : EMI Execution Service Specification -- -- Dear all, -- -- Since it was also my task to have a look through the EMI ES -- Specification, here my comments. -- -- * I would back up Etienne, that a chapter referring to Use Cases and -- Requirements would indeed be useful. -- -- * For the ordering I also felt that some things would have been more -- useful earlier on, especially the current chapter 8 "Resource and -- Activity representation and the current chapter 10 "Security -- Considerations" (especially with 10.3 therein) -- -- -- * The EMI ADL (chapter 9) would need a motivation why to start here from -- scratch and not just define an extension to something similar already -- existing. -- -- -- * The name of the Resource subelement NetworkInfo (9.3.5.3) could be -- chosen better, something like NetworkInfoInternal to emphasize that the -- network connection inside the computing element is meant. -- -- * 9.3.5.13 Benchmark is refering to BenchmarkType. That one is missing. -- Shouldn't Benchmark be a sub-element of BenchmarkType? -- -- * 9.3.6 RunTimeEnvironment is generally a sensible idea, but will be -- heavy on the service descriptions. This maybe needs more discussion with -- reference to 10.2. -- -- * The lines in Figure 1 should not go through the text. -- -- * The text is currently very hard to read, it needs at least a native -- speaker and a grammar nazi to fill in all the missing the, a, to,,,., -- and get rid of additional spaces. Some of the sentences are in best case -- misleading. -- -- My favorites were: -- 7/49 XML Validation: Chech whether XML is a valid XML document (i.e. -- well-formed and such like) -- 30/45, 9.3.5.8: -- If it is not defined that the user not interested to access session -- directory remotely (default is false). -- --> .. it is assumed that the user is... ? -- 9.3.5.2 Platform: -- Multiplicity is one or one. -- -- -- -- Minor things: -- p 7/45: Extensions marked as "must" must be understood, .. -- -> MUST -- p25/45: "critical": it is hard requirement. The service MUST provide -- this feature, satisfy the requirement otherwise the activity must be -- rejected (during the validation phase) -- --> "critical": it is a hard requirement. The service MUST provide this -- feature and satisfy the requirement, otherwise the activity MUST be -- rejected (already during the validation phase). -- -- p 19/45: In case of renewal the server must re-use the previous -- delegation ID submitted in the request. -- --> In case of renewal the server MUST re-use the previous DelegationID -- submitted in the request. -- -- -- End of chapter 7.1: Missing internal reference -- -- -- Cheers, -- Michaela -- -- -- -- Michaela Barth -- EGI.eu Coordination of Interoperations between NGIs and with other DCIs -- PDC Center for High Performance Computing -- CSC School of Computer Science and Communication -- KTH Royal Institute of Technology -- SE-100 44 Stockholm, Sweden -- -- Tel: +468-790 7891 -- SIP: caela@kth.se -- XMPP: caela@kth.se -- _______________________________________________ -- Pgi-wg mailing list -- Pgi-wg@ogf.org -- http://www.ogf.org/mailman/listinfo/pgi-wg