Folks, Here's what I did. 1) Accepted all edits including the changes I made, which are listed below. Feel free to object to these changes. Otherwise, the document is ready for the editor. 2) In section 4.4 there were two "should"s which I changed to "SHOULD"s as the section is generally proscriptive and therefore normative language is appropriate. 3) In section 5.2, I added the phrase ", when at the Proposed Recommendation stage of publication," two the first two paragraphs to make it clear when in the GGF process the rules apply. I felt the section header was not normative enough. That's all. Thank you everyone for making this document a complete project. I leave it to Andreas to post this version to GridForge and submit it to the editor as soon as possible. -- Take care: Dr. David Snelling < David . Snelling . UK . Fujitsu . com > Fujitsu Laboratories of Europe Hayes Park Central Hayes End Road Hayes, Middlesex UB4 8FE +44-208-606-4649 (Office) +44-208-606-4539 (Fax) +44-7768-807526 (Mobile)
I leave it to Andreas to post this version to GridForge and submit it to the editor as soon as possible.
I have reviewed the doc, removed a few remaining last comments, and made one minor change in section 3. ("This Profile" - > "This document...") I have uploaded it as version 15 on gridforge and also submitted it to the GGF Editor. Ref: https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-ggf-ogsa-profile... Andreas David Snelling wrote:
Folks,
Here's what I did.
1) Accepted all edits including the changes I made, which are listed below. Feel free to object to these changes. Otherwise, the document is ready for the editor.
2) In section 4.4 there were two "should"s which I changed to "SHOULD"s as the section is generally proscriptive and therefore normative language is appropriate.
3) In section 5.2, I added the phrase ", when at the Proposed Recommendation stage of publication," two the first two paragraphs to make it clear when in the GGF process the rules apply. I felt the section header was not normative enough.
That's all. Thank you everyone for making this document a complete project.
I leave it to Andreas to post this version to GridForge and submit it to the editor as soon as possible.
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