Thanks Jem, And this is a list of "nits picking." (b1) page 1 line 24 'what is meant by a Profile' should read 'what is meant by an OGSA Profile (hereafter "Profile")' Then, (b2) page 3 line 84, 87, 90, 110*2 (b3) page 4 line 113, 117, 118 (b4) page 5 line 180*2, 183, 214 (b5) page 6 line 239, 243, 250, 252 (b6) page 7 line 255, 259, 265, 270 (b7) page 8 line 306 "profile" should read "Profile" (b8) page 3 line 66 Add "[RFC2119]" at the end of sentence. (b9) page 3 line 104 "specification of profile" should read "specification or profile" (b10) page 3 line 110 "Specifications" should read "Specifications or profiles" (b11) page 4 line 134, 145 Add "[GFD.1]" at the end of the sentence. (b12) page 9 line 285 Add new reference [OASIS TCP] OASIS Technical Committee Process http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/process.php Then (b13) page 4 line 134, 145 Add "[OASIS TCP]" at the end of the sentence. (b14) page 5 line 211 Sub session title should read "Status and Adoption Level Classification of Referenced Specification or profile" If it is too long; "Status and Adoption Level Classification" (b15) page 5 line 214 "referenced specifications" should be "referenced specifications or profiles" (b16) page 6 table 1 top left cell should read "Referenced Specifications / Profiles" (b17) page 6 line 225 Add Legend text of "OGSA roadmap document" Appendix A (b18) page 6 line 229 (b19) page 6 line 238*2 (b20) page 7 line 295 "specification" should read "specification or profile" (b21) page 6 line 234 Add the following three lines. - if the entire profile is supported exactly as provided in the referenced profile. - if only part of the whole profile is required. - if optional parts of the profile are required. (b22) page 7 line 280 Add the following text "Specifications referenced directly or indirectly by a Informational Profile must be consistent. In other words, if two or more specifications reference the same third specification then they must reference the same version of that specification." Thanks, ---- Hiro Kishimoto Treadwell, Jem wrote:

Hi, I fixed the table and made some other minor edits, and I've now uploaded Profile Definition v12. It's available at http://tinyurl.com/93mpp.

- Jem

-----Original Message----- From: owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org] On Behalf Of Andreas Savva Sent: Monday, June 20, 2005 8:51 AM To: 'ogsa-wg' Subject: [ogsa-wg] Profile definition draft 11 uploaded

I've uploaded draft 11 of the OGSA Profile Definition. https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-ggf-ogsa-pro file-definition/en/11

The changes were described in a previous email by Hiro last week, and also discussed during the Wed. call. (http://www-unix.gridforum.org/mail_archive/ogsa-wg/2005/06/msg00063.htm l)

Draft 11 is basically the same as draft 10-a that was attached to Hiro's email. I made some additional minor revisions and cleanup: accepting old changes and deleting obsolete comments.

-- Andreas Savva