Hi Fred, My comments below: (1) Document category name We need to define name of this document category. In current draft, it is called; - Information model profile - Information model specification - Information model profiles + model extensions - Specification related to information model - Specification on profiles and extensions - OGSA information model profile - OGSA information model specification I prefer "OGSA information model profile" (OGSA IMP). (2) Description on how to do the rendering/data model I cannot find such description except first paragraph on page 5. (3) Section 4.1 DMTF CIM schema specific Status Type and Adoption Level is necessary. Using the same structure as chapter 5 of GFD.59 (OGSA profile definition) makes this section more easy-to-read. 4.1.x Recommended OGSA IMP as Proposed Recommendation Every CIM class in a Recommended IMP, when at the Proposed Recommendation stage of publication, MUST have one of the following DMTF CIM class status Final or Experimental. Every CIM class in a OGSA IMP Profile, when at the Proposed Recommendation stage of publication, MUST be Interoperable. CIM classes referenced by a Recommended OGSA IMP MUST be use the same version of CIM schema. (4) Please add DMTF CR process as new section in chapter 4 (5) merge section 4.2 into section 3.2 (6) What is the purpose of chapter 5? merge it into section 1.1? Thanks, ---- Hiro Kishimoto Fred Maciel wrote:

Hi,

I just finished a new version of the guidelines document to be reviewed in the face-to-face. Apologies for the delay. Most changes from the last version are shown in the document, but I'm not showing changes such as re-ordering of sections. I addressed all the feedback from the last revision in the March 8 teleconference. This version also includes lots of changes and comments from Jem (Jem: many thanks. BTW I erased the comments which I reflected in the text). I also changed the format to reflect the contents of the new GGF template.

As usual, the latest version is at the URL below.

https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/Modeling_Guideline s/en

I've also uploaded that version to the F2F folder:

Regards,

Fred Maciel Hitachi America R&D