v1.8 of Profile definition updated and uploaded
Folks, The latest with Ais from 6/1 telecoin are uploaded to Gridforge. Tom Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away. – Antoine de Saint-Exupery T o m M a g u i r e STSM, On Demand Architecture Poughkeepsie, NY 12601
What is the recommended way in which to make comments and/or suggest modifications to this document? I'm sorry that I don't know this. Thanks, Marty Marty Humphrey Assistant Professor Department of Computer Science University of Virginia
-----Original Message----- From: owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org] On Behalf Of Tom Maguire Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2005 10:55 PM To: ogsa-wg Subject: [ogsa-wg] v1.8 of Profile definition updated and uploaded
Folks, The latest with Ais from 6/1 telecoin are uploaded to Gridforge.
Tom
Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away. Antoine de Saint-Exupery
T o m M a g u i r e
STSM, On Demand Architecture
Poughkeepsie, NY 12601
Marty, I would suggest mark ups and inline comments in the document and then distribution to the mailing list. Or if you prefer just comments to the mailing list. Tom Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away. – Antoine de Saint-Exupery T o m M a g u i r e STSM, On Demand Architecture Poughkeepsie, NY 12601 "Marty Humphrey" <humphrey@cs.virg inia.edu> To Sent by: "'ogsa-wg'" <ogsa-wg@gridforum.org> owner-ogsa-wg@ggf cc .org "'Marty Humphrey'" <humphrey@cs.virginia.edu> Subject 06/08/2005 09:01 RE: [ogsa-wg] v1.8 of Profile AM definition updated and uploaded What is the recommended way in which to make comments and/or suggest modifications to this document? I'm sorry that I don't know this. Thanks, Marty Marty Humphrey Assistant Professor Department of Computer Science University of Virginia
-----Original Message----- From: owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org] On Behalf Of Tom Maguire Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2005 10:55 PM To: ogsa-wg Subject: [ogsa-wg] v1.8 of Profile definition updated and uploaded
Folks, The latest with Ais from 6/1 telecoin are uploaded to Gridforge.
Tom
Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away. – Antoine de Saint-Exupery
T o m M a g u i r e
STSM, On Demand Architecture
Poughkeepsie, NY 12601
A few nit-noids and some other general comments: Entire document: Should "WSRF" be added to all the places in the document when referring to this docment? (lines 26, 83, 103, etc). Page 3: line 24: recommend changing "distributed system management" to something more general, such as "distributed computing" or "grid computing". line 26: Needs rewording as it is a long sentance. suggestion: The OGSA WSRF Basic Profile 1.0 is a GGF Recommended Profile which describes uses of widely accepted specifications that have been found to enable interoperability and is modelled after the OGSA Profile Definition informational document [ogsa-profile-template]. line 115: spelling of introspecation Page 4 line 157: URLs for wsrc-rl and wsn do not resolve. Page 5 line 190: URL is not ready yet - however I think that is known and is expected to be there. Should WSRF be in the name here too? ----- I started glancing at this point - I'll continue with more detail reading tomorrow. -- Michael Behrens R2AD, LLC (571) 594-3008 (cell) *new* (703) 714-0442 (land)
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