Teleconference minutes - 22 December 2004
Minutes attached. Gridforge location: https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/minutes-20041222/en/1 This was the last call of year. Thanks to all who participated. For your reference the next teleconference is Jan. 5, 2005. Jan. 5 (10am-noon CDT ?) Data design team Jan. 5 (5pm-7pm CDT) Basic profile discussion Jan. 10 (5pm-7pm CDT) Roadmap document discussion Jan. 12 (10am-noon CDT ?) Data design team Jan. 12 (5pm-7pm CDT) Basic profile discussion Jan. 17 (5pm-7pm CDT) EMS design team Happy holidays. -- Andreas Savva OGSA Teleconference 22 December 2004 ==================================== * Participants Hiro Kishimoto (Fujitsu) Fred Maciel (Hitachi) Andreas Savva (Fujitsu) Jem Treadwell (HP) Minutes: Andreas Savva * Minutes for December 20 approved with no changes * OGSA version 1.0 - Reviewed main changes and remaining open issues; also did a number of edits online. - Author/editor re-ordering on first page - Deleted '...purpose and form...' in introduction and changed the way the next version is described. - en-dash to em-dash change for consistency - Requirements section 2.1.: Added 'interoperability' in title - Should be made a separate section in post-v1 versions - Ian's comment on virtualization: post-v1 - Resource management: Changed 'service instances' to 'services' - Reviewed references and style - To do (Andreas) - Figure 2: workflow should be capitalized (Workflow) - Move the copyright and intellectual property notices to the back. - Make sure that spelling is consistent: change english to US spelling - Add MUWS / MOWS references now that WSDM work has reached committee draft. - Add general acknowledgement for public comment reviewers and name Philipp Wieder since he gave very comprehensive comments. - Upload the new draft (draft 21) keeping the changes to draft 20 visible. * Glossary version 1.0 - Reviewed main changes and remaining open issues; also did a number of edits online. - Reviewed references and style. - Reviewed and revised definitions of terms, removed unused ones (e.g., MPICH) and modified others in line with usage (e.g., SLM to refer to manager not management). - To do (Jem) - Add acknowledgement for public comment reviewers - If possible, add all authors in references (do not abbreviate with 'et al'.) Update entries of documents since some have reached stable states. - Upload a new draft (change tracked)
Hi, I've uploaded an updated version of the Glossary, with change tracking still visible. You can find it at http://tinyurl.com/42omd. Note that although this is version 16, the default version remains at 15, which was the public comment version. All the best, - Jem
- To do (Jem) - Add acknowledgement for public comment reviewers - If possible, add all authors in references (do not abbreviate with 'et al'.) Update entries of documents since some have reached stable states. - Upload a new draft (change tracked)
Thanks Jem for uploading revised glossary. As I promise, I will read and feedback my comments by Jan 5th. Thanks and happy holidays, ---- Hiro Kishimoto
-----Original Message----- From: owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org] On Behalf Of Jem Treadwell Sent: Saturday, December 25, 2004 5:40 AM To: 'ogsa-wg' Subject: Re: [ogsa-wg] Teleconference minutes - 22 December 2004 (Glossary uploaded)
Hi, I've uploaded an updated version of the Glossary, with change tracking still visible. You can find it at http://tinyurl.com/42omd. Note that although this is version 16, the default version remains at 15, which was the public comment version.
All the best,
- Jem
- To do (Jem) - Add acknowledgement for public comment reviewers - If possible, add all authors in references (do not abbreviate with 'et al'.) Update entries of documents since some have reached stable states. - Upload a new draft (change tracked)
I uploaded draft 21. This draft is more or less up complete; the EMS section still needs some work, however. Changes are visible and are still relative to draft 19. Let me know if there are any problems. We might have some time on the next call (Jan. 5) to discuss both this document and the Glossary. Draft 19 is still the 'active' version so use the following url to download draft 21: https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-ggf-ogsa-spec/en...
- To do (Andreas) - Figure 2: workflow should be capitalized (Workflow) - Move the copyright and intellectual property notices to the back. - Make sure that spelling is consistent: change english to US spelling - Add MUWS / MOWS references now that WSDM work has reached committee draft. - Add general acknowledgement for public comment reviewers and name Philipp Wieder since he gave very comprehensive comments. - Upload the new draft (draft 21) keeping the changes to draft 20 visible.
Many thanks Andreas, I will read it though and get back to you if I find nits. Can you reply to the public comments on the gridForge? https://forge.gridforum.org/forum/forum.php?forum_id=423 I think the simplest way is paste the following excel sheet URL and ask them to check it out. https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/ogsa-v1-public-comment... /6 Thanks again, ---- Hiro Kishimoto
-----Original Message----- From: owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org] On Behalf Of Andreas Savva Sent: Wednesday, December 29, 2004 7:23 PM To: 'ogsa-wg' Subject: OGSA version 1.0 draft 21 (was Re: [ogsa-wg] Teleconference minutes - 22 December 2004)
I uploaded draft 21. This draft is more or less up complete; the EMS section still needs some work, however. Changes are visible and are still relative to draft 19. Let me know if there are any problems. We might have some time on the next call (Jan. 5) to discuss both this document and the Glossary.
Draft 19 is still the 'active' version so use the following url to download draft 21:
https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-ggf-ogsa-spec/en...
- To do (Andreas) - Figure 2: workflow should be capitalized (Workflow) - Move the copyright and intellectual property notices to the back. - Make sure that spelling is consistent: change english to US spelling - Add MUWS / MOWS references now that WSDM work has reached committee draft. - Add general acknowledgement for public comment reviewers and name Philipp Wieder since he gave very comprehensive comments. - Upload the new draft (draft 21) keeping the changes to draft 20 visible.
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Andreas Savva -
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Jem Treadwell