A few nit-noids and some other general comments: Entire document: Should "WSRF" be added to all the places in the document when referring to this docment? (lines 26, 83, 103, etc). Page 3: line 24: recommend changing "distributed system management" to something more general, such as "distributed computing" or "grid computing". line 26: Needs rewording as it is a long sentance. suggestion: The OGSA WSRF Basic Profile 1.0 is a GGF Recommended Profile which describes uses of widely accepted specifications that have been found to enable interoperability and is modelled after the OGSA Profile Definition informational document [ogsa-profile-template]. line 115: spelling of introspecation Page 4 line 157: URLs for wsrc-rl and wsn do not resolve. Page 5 line 190: URL is not ready yet - however I think that is known and is expected to be there. Should WSRF be in the name here too? ----- I started glancing at this point - I'll continue with more detail reading tomorrow. -- Michael Behrens R2AD, LLC (571) 594-3008 (cell) *new* (703) 714-0442 (land)