Fred, After reviewing version 14, I have two minor updates that I hope you'll want to incorporate for usability and completeness. (1) at the end of section 1.0, please point the reader to the dmtf published documents page for the latest dmtf process documents (this is important because the process docs are being updated this year to state much more about interactions between dmtf and alliance partners...contacting the liaison may not be enough and/or may result in a delay to getting questions answered (2) in section 4.3 (end of first paragraph), please change dmtf portal to dmtf feedback portal and include the URL http://www.dmtf.org/standards/feedback Otherwise, I'm happy with the doc. Ellen "Fred Maciel" <Fred.Maciel@hds.com> 04/28/2008 07:58 PM To Ellen Stokes/Austin/IBM@IBMUS cc <ogsa-wg@ogf.org> Subject modeling guidelines doc v14 Hi, I uploaded v14 to GridForge. The spreadsheet shows the comments that I'm not sure about, and the remaining ones are from Ellen and David, so please review them. Thanks, Fred Maciel Hitachi America R&D www.hitachi.com/truestories