Fred, Here are my comments on the model guidelines doc v13...nothing major in my opinion. - inconsistent use of the words attributes and properties; modify to use one word or the other throughout the document - section 2.3: this is correct at this point in time; however, please be aware that DMTF (in conjunction with its alliance partners) is modifying processes to provide the capability of extension through federation and/or delegation, and this work is expected to complete this year - recall that the DMTF structure just changed from WGs and TC to WGs, SCs, and TC....this needs to be reflected in sections 4.1 and 4.3 - section 4.3: DMTF is in the process of making a change to its portal so that attachements can be provided during feedback to the DMTF; so alternatively (when the portal change is complete) a CR with an attachment could be submitted using the portal (which is an easy way to get it to the right group and state that DMTF owns the rights of the change (alliance partner contributions are also acknowledged within the MOF/XML and on the CIM release web page) - the dates in the copyright in the Copyright Notice at the beginning of the document and in section 10 should say '2006-2008' - all URLs in the doc should be hyperlinks (found in various sections) - appendix A: last bullet should say 'CIM v2.16 experimental' - any figure/table references in the doc text need to have links to those referenced figures/tables Ellen