Hi Jem, I've made the following edits and uploaded version 20 to GridForge. https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-ggf-ogsa-roadmap... Please have a look. 1) Trademark section (page 1) I've delete "Open Grid Service Architecture" since only OGSA is our trademark at this moment. 2) Introduction (page 3) I've upload the first paragraph according to the agreement on the re-charter discussion on day five of August F2F. From the minutes;
* Why is the word "Open" used and defined in the charter? - Object to the statement "'Open' refers to ... and the standards themselves..." - OK to say that "Open" refers to the process. The say, the goal is to produce interoperability between implementations. - There is broad agreement to what we want to accept, we just need to agree on the text that describes it. * We probably need to take a look again at the Roadmap document.
3) OGSA Basic Security Profile Version 1.0 (page 23) We've already add two *basic* security profiles in section 5.2 and 5.3, this future profile should be renamed without "basic." Also, the roadmap has sections of OGSA-Authz-Attribute and OGSA-SAML Authz, I've replace explanation text by spec name and session number.
We can discuss this on Wednesday, but if anyone has info or wants to comment by mail, go ahead.
I'm afraid we have full agenda for this Wednesday. If time does not permit, let's discuss the roadmap on next Monday. Thanks, ---- Hiro Kishimoto Treadwell, Jem wrote:
Hi,
I've uploaded Roadmap v19, and the spreadsheet. This includes my own editing changes from recent calls, the public comment changes, and the changes that Tom & Takuya made. All the referenced-spec tables are dated September 1st.
I made some editing changes to Tom's text, and agreed it with Tom.
I've also made some editing changes to Takuya's text: Takuy, can you please check this and verify that it's OK - I want to be sure I didn't change the meaning of anything you said.
I'm not making this the Final Call version yet, because I need to clarify something: although Takuya put the AuthZ docs in section 5, and I agree that they're profiles (though the Use of SAML doesn't actually mention the word profile), the versions I found on GridForge don't conform to the OGSA Profile Definition. I'm not sure if that's a change that the group is planning before publication - Takuya, do you know? Also should we be making conformance a criteria for inclusion in section 5?
We can discuss this on Wednesday, but if anyone has info or wants to comment by mail, go ahead.
Thanks - have a great weekend...
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