Many thanks Andreas, I will read it though and get back to you if I find nits. Can you reply to the public comments on the gridForge? https://forge.gridforum.org/forum/forum.php?forum_id=423 I think the simplest way is paste the following excel sheet URL and ask them to check it out. https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/ogsa-v1-public-comment... /6 Thanks again, ---- Hiro Kishimoto
-----Original Message----- From: owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg@ggf.org] On Behalf Of Andreas Savva Sent: Wednesday, December 29, 2004 7:23 PM To: 'ogsa-wg' Subject: OGSA version 1.0 draft 21 (was Re: [ogsa-wg] Teleconference minutes - 22 December 2004)
I uploaded draft 21. This draft is more or less up complete; the EMS section still needs some work, however. Changes are visible and are still relative to draft 19. Let me know if there are any problems. We might have some time on the next call (Jan. 5) to discuss both this document and the Glossary.
Draft 19 is still the 'active' version so use the following url to download draft 21:
https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-ggf-ogsa-spec/en...
- To do (Andreas) - Figure 2: workflow should be capitalized (Workflow) - Move the copyright and intellectual property notices to the back. - Make sure that spelling is consistent: change english to US spelling - Add MUWS / MOWS references now that WSDM work has reached committee draft. - Add general acknowledgement for public comment reviewers and name Philipp Wieder since he gave very comprehensive comments. - Upload the new draft (draft 21) keeping the changes to draft 20 visible.