Hi Jem, I am sorry for my late response.
I've also made some editing changes to Takuya's text: Takuy, can you please check this and verify that it's OK - I want to be sure I didn't change the meaning of anything you said.
I checked your editing to find that it is perfect. It doesn't change any meaning. Thank you.
I'm not making this the Final Call version yet, because I need to clarify something: although Takuya put the AuthZ docs in section 5, and I agree that they're profiles (though the Use of SAML doesn't actually mention the word profile), the versions I found on GridForge don't conform to the OGSA Profile Definition. I'm not sure if that's a change that the group is planning before publication - Takuya, do you know?
In the last F2F meeting at the bay area, I think the consensus is to submit the documents as is, and make them change to conform to the Profile Definition in the future versions. So, I don't think that they are changing the documents to conform to the Profile Definition before publication.
Also should we be making conformance a criteria for inclusion in section 5?
We can discuss this on Wednesday, but if anyone has info or wants to comment by mail, go ahead.
Thanks - have a great weekend...
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