Mathias Dalheimer wrote:
I just created the charter BoF report and would like to ask you to have a look at it. In addition, I edited the charter according to the comments we received. You find both files attached.
The Minutes and Summary are fine. The updated charter draft looks mostly good, but I suggest a few changes: Charter->Scope, second paragraph, first alteration better worded as: and other working groups working on the OGSA-EMS architecture. Also elide reference to subgroups. They're not official entities. Also might slant things to indicate that this is not a constraint on us (i.e. that we can work with other groups as well, if appropriate). Charter->Goals, second full paragraph, last sentence better worded as: In order to foster collaboration with the OGSA-WG, we will provide the OGSA-WG with service descriptions as an informational document. Query: should that second-to-last word be "informal"? I think it looks like we're nearly there. Hooray! Donal.