Glenn Wasson wrote:
This email announces the LAST CALL for the HPC File Staging Profile (HPC-FSP). The latest version of this document can be found at http://forge.ogf.org/sf/go/doc15024. Last call will last for one week (ending on 2/11/08).
I think you're not quite ready for Last Call yet. You have a number of issues still to fix, most of which are minor. In section 3.1.2, the wording prohibits a future profile from extending this profile to support <FileSystemName>. It also means that any implementation which *does* support <FileSystemName> cannot be compliant with this profile. Is this intended? You're using 'must' (in lower case) in a fair number of places. You are aware that that is non-normative? Now for the minor editorial stuff: In the Copyright Notice on the front page, the copyright year need to be extended. :-) Sections 5, 6 and 7 are incomplete. In section 8, the full copyright notice is wrong. (Inconsistent too.) Similarly for section 9. In section 10, the URL for JSDL 1.0 is missing (and the reference should not be just to a URL anyway; it's a published document, a comment which also applies to the BES 1.0 reference). The reference to HPC Profile 1.0 is incomplete. In Table 2-1, it would be a good idea to shade the title row differently to the other rows. You're inconsistent about whether references to References are bookmarks or not. In section 3.4, it would be nice if the paragraphs describing particular protocols were indented to make them more visually distinct from the surrounding text. It seems there were more nits to be picked than I expected. :-) Donal.