Comments on the last call draft
I found some minor non-normative editorial issues: 1. Ravi's name is missing or hidden in the header on pages 2 & 3 2. Last paragraph of 1.2 'they are able to still interoperate' 3. Page 15. Definition of @dmi:DataUrl attribute - remove the space 4. Section 4.3.3 - the title indent needs to be fixed 5. Section 5.2.6.1 - broken link 6. Section 5.4.1 - Replace Figure XXX with something & there's a broken reference in the previous paragraph I've not had time to look at the XML - and apologies for missing the call. Steven
Thanks Steven - can we pass these on to Greg Newby? Michel did the final edit afore your email. Can we take this forward in some manner? Mario On Wed, 21 May 2008, Steven Newhouse wrote:
I found some minor non-normative editorial issues:
1. Ravi's name is missing or hidden in the header on pages 2 & 3 2. Last paragraph of 1.2 'they are able to still interoperate' 3. Page 15. Definition of @dmi:DataUrl attribute - remove the space 4. Section 4.3.3 - the title indent needs to be fixed 5. Section 5.2.6.1 - broken link 6. Section 5.4.1 - Replace Figure XXX with something & there's a broken reference in the previous paragraph
I've not had time to look at the XML - and apologies for missing the call.
Steven -- ogsa-dmi-wg mailing list ogsa-dmi-wg@ogf.org http://www.ogf.org/mailman/listinfo/ogsa-dmi-wg
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Hi all, sorry for not copying OGSA-DMI in. I have been in conversation with Greg on this already. I sent him an edited draft 58, called "58bis" incorporating Steve's comments. Cheers, Michel On 22 May 2008, at 13:16, Mario Antonioletti wrote:
Thanks Steven - can we pass these on to Greg Newby? Michel did the final edit afore your email. Can we take this forward in some manner?
Mario
On Wed, 21 May 2008, Steven Newhouse wrote:
I found some minor non-normative editorial issues:
1. Ravi's name is missing or hidden in the header on pages 2 & 3 2. Last paragraph of 1.2 'they are able to still interoperate' 3. Page 15. Definition of @dmi:DataUrl attribute - remove the space 4. Section 4.3.3 - the title indent needs to be fixed 5. Section 5.2.6.1 - broken link 6. Section 5.4.1 - Replace Figure XXX with something & there's a broken reference in the previous paragraph
I've not had time to look at the XML - and apologies for missing the call.
Steven -- ogsa-dmi-wg mailing list ogsa-dmi-wg@ogf.org http://www.ogf.org/mailman/listinfo/ogsa-dmi-wg
+ -----------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Mario Antonioletti:EPCC,JCMB,The King's Buildings,Edinburgh EH9 3JZ. | |Tel:0131 650 5141|mario@epcc.ed.ac.uk|http://www.epcc.ed.ac.uk/~mario/ | + -----------------------------------------------------------------------+ -- The University of Edinburgh is a charitable body, registered in Scotland, with registration number SC005336.
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Hi,
I have been in conversation with Greg on this already. I sent him an edited draft 58, called "58bis" incorporating Steve's comments.
Cool. Thanks Michel. Mario +-----------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Mario Antonioletti:EPCC,JCMB,The King's Buildings,Edinburgh EH9 3JZ. | |Tel:0131 650 5141|mario@epcc.ed.ac.uk|http://www.epcc.ed.ac.uk/~mario/ | +-----------------------------------------------------------------------+ -- The University of Edinburgh is a charitable body, registered in Scotland, with registration number SC005336.
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Mario Antonioletti -
Michel Drescher -
Steven Newhouse