Releasing pen on functional draft

Folks, I'll release the pen for the funcitonal draft. Cheers, Michel -- Michel <dot> Drescher <at> uk <dot> fujitsu <dot> com Fujitsu Laboratories of Europe +44 20 8606 4834

Hi, I only made some minor changes: - Inlined the namespace table; - Some minor text changes; - A couple of new comments; - A couple of suggestions for a minimal subset of entries for the undo operation - 3 suggestions to be precise - if people can think of others we can add these to the list. There are a number of NextGrid references in the document which is not surprising as the text came from there - just wondering what the final relationship with NextGrid is going to be. Anyone want to take up the write token? I've unlocked the document but have not been able to do as much as I would have liked to ... Mario +-----------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Mario Antonioletti:EPCC,JCMB,The King's Buildings,Edinburgh EH9 3JZ. | |Tel:0131 650 5141|mario@epcc.ed.ac.uk|http://www.epcc.ed.ac.uk/~mario/ | +-----------------------------------------------------------------------+

Hi Mario, Mario Antonioletti wrote:
Hi, I only made some minor changes:
- Inlined the namespace table; - Some minor text changes; - A couple of new comments; - A couple of suggestions for a minimal subset of entries for the undo operation - 3 suggestions to be precise - if people can think of others we can add these to the list.
There are a number of NextGrid references in the document which is not surprising as the text came from there - just wondering what the final relationship with NextGrid is going to be.
I derived the OGSA-DMI Functional Specification from a very similar document from the NextGRID project. I do not envision a direct, i.e. normative, relationship between the documents. For now, consider the references as residual artifacts that need cleaning up.
Anyone want to take up the write token? I've unlocked the document but have not been able to do as much as I would have liked to ...
Don't worry, anything, even the smallest change, is progress. Thanks! Cheers, Michel
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