Hi,
I am also happy to conduct the document review on the mailing list - but it is crucial that I get comments in soon!
Had a read through the document on the train. Fixed some typos and reworded a small number of items. I think you should reference the document once [ANTONIOLETTI] but not keep on using the reference to speak bout the document - either call it the OGSA-DMI funcitonal specification or the functional specification or find some suitable abbreviation... anyhow, other than the typos it seemed ok to me. Mario +-----------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Mario Antonioletti:EPCC,JCMB,The King's Buildings,Edinburgh EH9 3JZ. | |Tel:0131 650 5141|mario@epcc.ed.ac.uk|http://www.epcc.ed.ac.uk/~mario/ | +-----------------------------------------------------------------------+ -- The University of Edinburgh is a charitable body, registered in Scotland, with registration number SC005336.