Hi Mario, all, you are absolutely right - I selected "the Functional Specification" (note the capital start letters) to refer to the "OGSA- DMI Functional Specification 1.0", and "the Rendering (ditto) for the "OGSA-DMI Plain WS Rendering Specification 1.0". Please find attached draft 13 (also on Gridforge: http://forge.ogf.org/sf/go/doc15259?nav=1) Cheers, Michel On 17 Oct 2008, at 08:56, Mario Antonioletti wrote:
Hi,
I am also happy to conduct the document review on the mailing list - but it is crucial that I get comments in soon!
Had a read through the document on the train. Fixed some typos and reworded a small number of items. I think you should reference the document once [ANTONIOLETTI] but not keep on using the reference to speak bout the document - either call it the OGSA-DMI funcitonal specification or the functional specification or find some suitable abbreviation... anyhow, other than the typos it seemed ok to me.
Mario
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