All,

I know we've just tried to close the document down... but I've been doing a bit of coding and have some suggested changes and documentation errors from the implementation to date.

Hope these seem sensible.

Steven

Changes

4.2.1.2.1 - Change the names in the DEPR (same semantics but clearer meaning)

AvailableProtocols --> DataLocations

Protocol -> Data (Attributes: Name -> Protocol & url -> DataUrl

4.2.1

requestDataTransferInstance -> GetDataTransferInstance

4.2.2

getFactoryAttributesDocument -> GetFactoryAttributesDocument

4.3

Add a fault: NoDataLocationsInEpr

Change NoTransferProtocolAggrementFault -> NoSourceSinkProtocolMatchFault

5.1.2.1 (& 5.2.7.1.1)

Change Status element to State element

5.2

Capitalise first letter of each state change operation

5.2.4

In the text we have a restart operation. In the state diagram we have a resume operation and a resumed event. Something needs to be rationalized here! Personally I prefer changing to the resume operation - restart to me has a different meaning (going back to the beginning) while resume starts mid-transfer after coming out of the suspended state.

5.2.6

getStatus -> GetState

Editorial Errors

4.1.1.1 - cross referencing errors

5.1.1.1 - ditto

5.1.4.1

5.2.6.1

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