I have added a few comments to the version that Mario marked up: (See attached file: ogsa-dmi-wsi-rendering-09 - AWL.doc)

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Mario Antonioletti <mario@epcc.ed.ac.uk>

Mario Antonioletti <mario@epcc.ed.ac.uk> Sent by: ogsa-dmi-wg-bounces@ogf.org 09/26/2008 06:40 AM

To Michel Drescher <Michel.Drescher@uk.fujitsu.com> cc OGSA-DMI <ogsa-dmi-wg@ogf.org> Subject Re: [ogsa-dmi-wg] Telcon.

Hi,
   Had a quick read through the main text. Have made a small number of
change tracked changes and added a couple of comments. Have not put on
Grid Forge as yet in case there has been parallel editing.

Mario


On Thu, 25 Sep 2008, Michel Drescher wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> I would like to have some time to talk about the Plain WS Rendering document
> - I finally was able to shovel some time free to start adding some meat to
> the document.
>
> Please find attached draft 8 of the Plain WS Rendering document (also on
> Gridforge). I have done some skeleton wording in Abstract and Introduction.
> The main changes and topic to discuss is section 3 defining the message
> exchanges for the DTF port type. I intend to use that as a stanza for section
> 4.
>
> Cheers,
> Michel

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