All, I know we've just tried to close the document down... but I've been doing a bit of coding and have some suggested changes and documentation errors from the implementation to date. Hope these seem sensible. Steven Changes 4.2.1.2.1 - Change the names in the DEPR (same semantics but clearer meaning) AvailableProtocols --> DataLocations Protocol -> Data (Attributes: Name -> Protocol & url -> DataUrl 4.2.1 requestDataTransferInstance -> GetDataTransferInstance 4.2.2 getFactoryAttributesDocument -> GetFactoryAttributesDocument 4.3 Add a fault: NoDataLocationsInEpr Change NoTransferProtocolAggrementFault -> NoSourceSinkProtocolMatchFault 5.1.2.1 (& 5.2.7.1.1) Change Status element to State element 5.2 Capitalise first letter of each state change operation 5.2.4 In the text we have a restart operation. In the state diagram we have a resume operation and a resumed event. Something needs to be rationalized here! Personally I prefer changing to the resume operation - restart to me has a different meaning (going back to the beginning) while resume starts mid-transfer after coming out of the suspended state. 5.2.6 getStatus -> GetState Editorial Errors 4.1.1.1 - cross referencing errors 5.1.1.1 - ditto 5.1.4.1 5.2.6.1