I've just uploaded a new working draft of the OGSA Data Architecture that addresses the public comments from Jens Jensen.  I've also added some more text to the Scope section, to properly set expectations. 
 
I believe this means we have addressed all the public comments.  Hurrah!
 
We have to update the reference given for the Scenarios document and consider how to reference v1.6 of the OGSA Glossary.  I'll ask the OGF editor for advice on these points.
 
Other than that, I think we're done.  (Oh, and we have to reply to the artefacts in the public comments tracker, but that's straightforward).
 
Dave Berry
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National e-Science Centre
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