I have uploaded a new version of the OGSA Data Architecture document to Grid Forge. This version:

1. Addresses typographical errors noted in Public Comment feedback from Clive & Krasimira
2. Adds an "Information Service" section per Hiro

I also took a look at the opening and closing sections to see if I saw an inconsistency in objective for the document (this was a comment received at OGF 21). I saw none.

Mario - the Data Access section has a number of uses of MUST and MAY. These are normative and probably should be changed. Please look at them and see if we can do something as simple as lower casing these without losing value.

Dave has the write lock per our last teleconference.

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