OGSA Data Working Group Telcon - 04/10/07 ========================================= Agenda: - OGF21 - Public Comments Attendees: Dave Berry, NeSC Mario Antonioletti, EPCC Allen Luniewski, IBM o OGF21 Allen found out he could go to OGF21 during the call so the OGSA Data Architecture session at OGF21 can go ahead. o Public Comments http://forge.gridforum.org/sf/discussion/do/listTopics/projects.ggf-editor/d... Comment by Peter Kunszt about affiliation is straightforward to fix. Comment by Jem Treadwell about data consistency, we need to check how we are using the term or whether we should associate the term policy with that. Comment by Dave Berry about typos in the glossary should be trivial to fix. Comments by Hiro Kishimoto, first one is easy to deal with, some text got cut off in the figure and numbering of services (using letters), and rewording of ByteIO to OGSA ByteIO and DMI to OGSA DMI. Question about moving data transfer paragraph to an earlier section may require some rewording and some shifting. Should use client as opposed to consumer - generally agreed. Comment in section 2.5 will require rephrasing. We do not use italics consistently (not in the glossary) Consistency about capitalisation of bullet points. We need to look at the comment: '"Secure channel" is Security Profile instead of Basic Security Profile.' (HK7) - maybe remove the word Basic from "OGSA Basic Security Profile". HK8 should be a straightforward change to move normative document to a set of profiles. HK9 - add a table caption. Need to change the associated text too to reference the table. HK10 - this will have to be added into the text. HK11 & HK12 - may not want to use bold but the point is taken. A number of in-lined changes are ok'ed. change "services -> interface and protocols" is ok but it should be interfaces. HK13 - requires discussion - we remove the current suggested recommendation OASIS CIM TC that is already there. HK14 - needs to be updated, check references to WS Policy. HK15 - yep HK16 - yes but may require some word smithing. HK17 - requires discussion, don't want to talk about workflow. HK18 - needs to be discussed, should probably be done via EMS. Need to discuss Reservation with an OGSA Person. Add a section on 3.13 on Information services: Please add Information Service (e.g. repository, catalog or directory) here. Data services can use information service. On the other hand, Information Service use data service for its storage. Allen will chase this one up. +-- Try to get more people to comment on the document. DONM: 2 Nov 07, 4pm BST. +-----------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Mario Antonioletti:EPCC,JCMB,The King's Buildings,Edinburgh EH9 3JZ. | |Tel:0131 650 5141|mario@epcc.ed.ac.uk|http://www.epcc.ed.ac.uk/~mario/ | +-----------------------------------------------------------------------+