PS: May I propose that anyone wanting to edit be explicit about taking the pen. E.g., I know that Peter Lane wants to make some changes to the BES-Activity text.


At 09:35 AM 9/5/2006 -0500, Ian Foster wrote:
Andrew:

I have so far done the following things, after accepting all previous changes:

* Re-inserted BES-Activity material, as agreed on a previous call
* Removed a few remaining spurious references to WS-BaseFaults
* Changed some occurences of "base state model" to "basic state model" for consistency
* Various minor typographical changes.
* Fixed up section numbering
* Moved "security considerations" to the end, as is conventional

I enclose version 24 and release the pen.

More work is needed on the BES-Activity material.

Ian.


At 09:26 AM 9/5/2006 -0400, Andrew Grimshaw wrote:

Ian,

What mods are you going to do? We had specific writing assignments from last weeks call. The next thing to be done by Mark and Chris S. is to get XML & WSDL stuff correct at the end of the document. We want to lock the text, so we don’t have to keep redoing the porttypes.

A

 
From: ogsa-bes-wg-bounces@ogf.org [mailto:ogsa-bes-wg-bounces@ogf.org] On Behalf Of Ian Foster
Sent: Monday, September 04, 2006 7:30 PM
To: Mailing List for OGSA-HPCP-WG; Peter G. Lane
Cc: ogsa-bes-wg@ggf.org; ogsa-hpcp-wg@ggf.org
Subject: Re: [OGSA-BES-WG] [ogsa-hpcp-wg] Revised version of BES draftspecification

 

I would like to claim the pen.

Ian.

At 02:56 PM 9/2/2006 -0600, Peter G. Lane wrote:

I'm done with my changes for the moment. The sections I was tasked to fill out were mostly done, so it was mostly just polish. I also did a lot of polishing to the operations, especially the schemas and WSDLs. I'd really appreciate it if people could look at this version before I put it up on the BES documents page. I want to make sure everybody's ok with the changes I made. Here is a general overview of what I did:

- Changed all references to GetActivyStatus and GetActivitiesStatus (the document inconsistently had both) to GetActivityStatuses to be both self consistent and consistent with GetActivityDocuments (according to my dictionary, this is the correct plural of "status").
- Added myself to the authors list.
- Fixed some xsd:any element declarations in operation wrapper types.
- Removed "Type" suffix from all instance elements since they are not complexTypes.
- General clean up of the schema to be consistent and more readable.
- Removed all minOccurs="1" and maxOccurs="1" element attributes since these values are the default.
- Fixed the s12:Fault element declarations.
- Removed duplicate LocalResourceManagerType element from BasicResourceAttributesDocumentType (also exists in BESResourceAttributesDocumentType).
- Added fault element to the GetActivityDocuments response type
- Added explicit wsa:Action attributes to all input and output operation elements
- Updated the non-normative message examples

I should note that the section numbers seem quite messed up. Somebody who has a better idea of where things are supposed to fit ought to make sure the numbers are ok. I would have assumed that Word would take care of this automatically, but I guess not.

Peter



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