Dear WG the attached Word document with track changes was submitted to me by Tom Scavo whilst the OGF web site was experiencing difficulties, and so it was not submitted via the normal public comment mechanism. However, when I tried to do this today, since there is no facility for adding attachments to public comments, the comment simply says that the attachment will be posted to the OGSA-Authz mailing list via this email. regards David -- ***************************************************************** David W. Chadwick, BSc PhD Professor of Information Systems Security The Computing Laboratory, University of Kent, Canterbury, CT2 7NF Skype Name: davidwchadwick Tel: +44 1227 82 3221 Fax +44 1227 762 811 Mobile: +44 77 96 44 7184 Email: D.W.Chadwick@kent.ac.uk Home Page: http://www.cs.kent.ac.uk/people/staff/dwc8/index.html Research Web site: http://www.cs.kent.ac.uk/research/groups/iss/index.html Entrust key validation string: MLJ9-DU5T-HV8J PGP Key ID is 0xBC238DE5 *****************************************************************