
Hi all, These documents (latest renderings attached) are due to be submitted to the OGF editor pipeline to become OGF recommended documents. We will submit them EOB (CET) Thursday. If there are people here that have time to read through the documents looking for any final issues (conceptual, grammatical etc) that effort would be highly appreciated. Also if there are people here who are missing from the documents contributor list please reply directly to me and I'll sort it out. Thanks Andy ------------------------------------------------------------- Intel Ireland Limited (Branch) Collinstown Industrial Park, Leixlip, County Kildare, Ireland Registered Number: E902934 This e-mail and any attachments may contain confidential material for the sole use of the intended recipient(s). Any review or distribution by others is strictly prohibited. If you are not the intended recipient, please contact the sender and delete all copies.

Hi all, These documents (latest renderings attached) are due to be submitted to
OGF editor pipeline to become OGF recommended documents. We will submit them EOB (CET) Thursday. If there are people here that have time to read
I only had time for a quick read-through. Found that in Table 1 of the Infra doc the scheme for ipnetworkinterface is not correct. It should be "<schema>/infrastructure/networkinterface#". Problem is that it will probably mess up the table rendering... regards, Ralf On Wed, 9 Mar 2011 13:11:40 +0000, "Edmonds, AndrewX" <andrewx.edmonds@intel.com> wrote: the through
the documents looking for any final issues (conceptual, grammatical etc) that effort would be highly appreciated.
Also if there are people here who are missing from the documents contributor list please reply directly to me and I'll sort it out.
Thanks
Andy

Thanks for that Ralf - I've committed those changes along with some minor corrections of my own. Andy -----Original Message----- From: Ralf Nyren [mailto:ralf@nyren.net] Sent: Thursday, March 10, 2011 11:57 AM To: Edmonds, AndrewX Cc: occi-wg@ogf.org Subject: Re: [occi-wg] Core and Infrastructure Documents I only had time for a quick read-through. Found that in Table 1 of the Infra doc the scheme for ipnetworkinterface is not correct. It should be "<schema>/infrastructure/networkinterface#". Problem is that it will probably mess up the table rendering... regards, Ralf On Wed, 9 Mar 2011 13:11:40 +0000, "Edmonds, AndrewX" <andrewx.edmonds@intel.com> wrote:
Hi all,
These documents (latest renderings attached) are due to be submitted to
the
OGF editor pipeline to become OGF recommended documents. We will submit
them
EOB (CET) Thursday. If there are people here that have time to read
through
the documents looking for any final issues (conceptual, grammatical etc)
that effort would be highly appreciated.
Also if there are people here who are missing from the documents
contributor
list please reply directly to me and I'll sort it out.
Thanks
Andy
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