Some suggestions & question: - 1.1 Introduction: after 1st sentence you could add, for context, "Kinds are analogous to resources in REST terminology" - Entries with a title of "Actions": We should note that "Actions are expressed using the Link syntax" - 1.3.2.1 A question on "occi.network.gateway" - is it valid to specify a gateway in CIDR notation? Anyone? Andy -----Original Message----- From: occi-wg-bounces@ogf.org [mailto:occi-wg-bounces@ogf.org] On Behalf Of Thijs Metsch Sent: Tuesday, June 01, 2010 11:31 AM To: occi-wg@ogf.org Subject: [occi-wg] New OCCI Infra doc build - please review: (was push by tmetsch - fixed issue 41 on 2010-06-0110:26 GMT) Hi @all, Please review the enclosed PDF file which reflects the latest changes to the OCCI Infrastructure document. Remember that we want to publish this document (and the core and HTTP rendering documents) ASAP (before OGF 29). Especially review the contributors list: I know some are missing - please send me a direct mail (no reply all) when you feel someone is missing. Cheers, -Thijs
-----Original Message----- From: occi-wg-bounces@ogf.org [mailto:occi-wg-bounces@ogf.org] On Behalf Of occi@googlecode.com Sent: Dienstag, 1. Juni 2010 12:27 To: occi-wg@ogf.org Subject: [occi-wg] [occi] push by tmetsch - fixed issue 41 on 2010-06- 0110:26 GMT
Revision: e3d1f0d2c2 Author: tmetsch Date: Tue Jun 1 03:24:17 2010 Log: fixed issue 41 http://code.google.com/p/occi/source/detail?r=e3d1f0d2c2
Modified: /docs/occi-infrastructure.xml /docs/occi-infrastructure_book.xml /docs/ogf_template.xsl
======================================= --- /docs/occi-infrastructure.xml Tue Jan 12 01:29:18 2010 +++ /docs/occi-infrastructure.xml Tue Jun 1 03:24:17 2010 @@ -179,7 +179,7 @@
<entry>Float (10^9 bytes)</entry>
- <entry>RAM in megabytes (e.g. 16, 0.512)</entry> + <entry>RAM in gigabytes (e.g. 1, 0.512)</entry> </row>
<row> @@ -416,7 +416,14 @@ <title>Storage</title>
<para>A storage resource is capable of mass storage of data (e.g. a - virtual hard drive).</para> + virtual hard drive). </para> + + <note> + <para>The actions defined here should trigger operations on e.g. + virtual images. The implementation of these operations is left to + Cloud Storage APIs and the corresponding Storage backend + solutions.</para> + </note>
<section> <title>Attributes</title> ======================================= --- /docs/occi-infrastructure_book.xml Tue Jan 12 04:29:36 2010 +++ /docs/occi-infrastructure_book.xml Tue Jun 1 03:24:17 2010 @@ -46,11 +46,14 @@ </listitem>
<listitem> - <para>OCCI XHTML5 rendering</para> + <para>OCCI HTTP Header rendering</para> </listitem>
<listitem> - <para>OCCI HTTP Header rendering</para> + <para>(OCCI XHTML5 rendering)<footnote> + <para>The OCCI XHTML5 rendering will be released in near + future.</para> + </footnote></para> </listitem> </itemizedlist>
@@ -74,10 +77,10 @@ <section> <title>Contributors</title>
- <para>The following people have contributed to this document.</para> + <para>The following people edited this document.</para>
<table> - <title>List of contributors</title> + <title>List of editors</title>
<tgroup cols="3"> <thead> @@ -102,7 +105,7 @@ <row> <entry>Sam Johnston</entry>
- <entry>Australian Online Solutions</entry> + <entry>Google</entry>
<entry>samj@samj.net</entry> </row> @@ -110,11 +113,32 @@ <row> <entry>Thijs Metsch</entry>
- <entry>Sun Microsystems - RESERVOIR project</entry> - - <entry>thijs.metsch@sun.com</entry> + <entry>Sun Microsystems - RESERVOIR project, Platform + Computing</entry> + + <entry>tmetsch@platform.com</entry> </row> - + </tbody> + </tgroup> + </table> + + <para>The editors would like to thank the following contributors:</para> + + <table> + <title>List of contributors</title> + + <tgroup cols="3"> + <thead> + <row> + <entry align="center">Name</entry> + + <entry align="center">Affiliation</entry> + + <entry align="center">Contact</entry> + </row> + </thead> + + <tbody> <row> <entry>Gary Mazzaferro</entry>
@@ -122,6 +146,22 @@
<entry>garymazzaferro@gmail.com</entry> </row> + + <row> + <entry>Shlomo Swidler</entry> + + <entry>Orchestratus</entry> + + <entry>shlomo.swidler@orchestratus.com</entry> + </row> + + <row> + <entry>Michael Behrens</entry> + + <entry>R2AD</entry> + + <entry>michael.behrens@r2ad.com</entry> + </row> </tbody> </tgroup> </table> @@ -161,7 +201,8 @@ <section> <title>Full Copyright Notice</title>
- <para>Copyright (C) Open Grid Forum (2009,2010). All Rights Reserved.</para> + <para>Copyright (C) Open Grid Forum (2009,2010). All Rights + Reserved.</para>
<para>This document and translations of it may be copied and furnished to others, and derivative works that comment on or otherwise explain it or ======================================= --- /docs/ogf_template.xsl Thu Jan 14 05:30:01 2010 +++ /docs/ogf_template.xsl Tue Jun 1 03:24:17 2010 @@ -20,28 +20,34 @@ <xsl:param name="chapter.autolabel"> 1 </xsl:param>
<xsl:param name="section.autolabel.max.depth"> 4 </xsl:param> - - <xsl:param name="shade.verbatim" select="1"></xsl:param> + + <xsl:param name="shade.verbatim" select="1" />
<xsl:attribute-set name="xref.properties"> <xsl:attribute name="font-family">serif</xsl:attribute> + <xsl:attribute name="font-size">8pt</xsl:attribute> + <xsl:attribute name="font-style">italic</xsl:attribute> </xsl:attribute-set> - + <!-- line breaking in verbatim --> + <xsl:attribute-set name="monospace.verbatim.properties"> <xsl:attribute name="wrap-option">wrap</xsl:attribute> + <xsl:attribute name="hyphenation-character">\</xsl:attribute> </xsl:attribute-set>
<!-- borders for tips and warnings--> + <xsl:attribute-set name="admonition.properties"> <xsl:attribute name="border">0.5pt solid black</xsl:attribute> + <xsl:attribute name="padding">0.1in</xsl:attribute> </xsl:attribute-set>
- <!-- general use sans-serif font--> + <!-- general use sans-serif font-->
<xsl:attribute-set name="root.properties"> <xsl:attribute name="font-family">sans-serif</xsl:attribute> @@ -103,7 +109,8 @@ </xsl:attribute-set>
<!-- temporary in there for para numbering --> -<!-- + + <!-- <xsl:template match="para[parent::section or parent::chapter]"> <fo:block xsl:use-attribute-sets="normal.para.spacing"> <xsl:call-template name="anchor" /> @@ -147,7 +154,7 @@ </fo:block>
<fo:block> - <xsl:text>Jan. 12, 2010</xsl:text> + <xsl:text>Jun. 1, 2010</xsl:text> </fo:block> </xsl:when> </xsl:choose> _______________________________________________ occi-wg mailing list occi-wg@ogf.org http://www.ogf.org/mailman/listinfo/occi-wg
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