
First, Great work! Here are some editorial comments: - Please ensure line breaks at col 80 - The pdf build is broken. There is a missing dependency of "! LaTeX Error: File `json_rendering.out.pyg' not found." Please fix with a README with directions on installing the dependency. - In all tables, 'name resources' doesn't make sense. Possibly should be 'named resources'? If so I can make the edits or it's at your pleasure :-) - 'Necessity' in all tables. This is some what out of step with existing specs. Can it be aligned along 'Mutability' and 'Multiplicity' as in the existing OCCI specification series? - I've made and committed some minor changes. Review at your leisure. HTH, Andy Andy Edmonds Senior Researcher Institute of Information Technology Zurich University of Applied Sciences http://andy.edmonds.be, @dizz