Hi Ralf, all,
I had a quick look over the document. It looks good to me in general,
nice job!
Two small comments:
- 'Errata Draft GFD-P-R.183'
This is not an errata document, but a new GFD document (no matter
if it keeps the number or not). The document should thus be
clearly marked as a new revision of the OCCI Core specification,
which *contains* Errata. A sentence in that respect in the
'Status of this Document' section would be good. A statement
about how that revision / how thee errata influence depending
specs (OCCI infrastructure, OCCI renderings) would also be useful
and clarifying.
- errata section 6.
- <pedantic> please add a page break before that section </pedantic>
- for each item, it would be great if you could add a short
statement if that item has any consequences for implementors of
the earlier revision, in particular for backward compatibility.
Best, Andre.
On Mon, Oct 1, 2012 at 11:36 PM, Ralf Nyren
Hi,
I have updated the OCCI Core document to include the feedback on the last errata draft.
Please find a PDF attached and refer to the Git commit log [1] for details.
The document now contains an Errata Summary and is (in my view) close to its final state. If you have any pending corrections for OCCI Core now is the time to speak up!
Very important to read and provide feedback on the Core errata update and the JSON Rendering spec.
regards, Ralf
[1] http://redmine.ogf.org/projects/occi-wg/repository/revisions/core-errata/cha...
On Tue, 25 Sep 2012 17:54:48 +0200, Feldhaus, Florian
wrote: Hi,
I just spoke with Thijs and we would suggest to skip the TelCo today and encourage everyone to join the TelCo next week 18:00 CET. We would like to discuss all remaining issues with the OCCI Core and OCCI JSON documents and then prepare them for submission to the OGF review process.
It is very important, that everyone checks the documents again. The latest versions of the documents can be found here:
http://redmine.ogf.org/projects/occi-wg/repository/revisions/core-errata/cha...
http://redmine.ogf.org/projects/occi-wg/repository/revisions/json/changes/js...
Cheers, Florian
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