Attached is a updated version of the draft arch rec doc for editing. I have (I think) included all sections of the strawman. I need to edit section 4, and 5. We need to get section 6 (service plane interactions) from Joan and Tomohiro - possibly as slides for OGF. I think this gives enough to decide how to spend time at OGF. Tomohiro -- if you want to try to put this in google docs we can try editing that way. I think that you had to separate pics from the words to use google docs -- is that right? I think there are still some concepts that need clarification. I will try to comment where I think this is so in the next couple days. We should try to talk about structure of the doc and process for work at OGF - who will be there, if there will be dialin, etc. John