2016/07/04 18:49、Guy Roberts <Guy.Roberts@geant.org> のメール：

Hello All
 
Thanks Chin and John for this.  I have cleaned this up, i.e. removed comments and updated fields and dates.
 
This is now v7 and is available here for upload for public comment:https://redmine.ogf.org/issues/284
 
Guy
 
From: Chin Guok [mailto:chin@es.net] 
Sent: 02 July 2016 17:41
To: Guy Roberts
Cc: nsi-wg@ogf.org; Greg Newby (newby@arsc.edu); Jens Jensen; Richard Hughes-Jones; Alan Sill (alan.sill@ttu.edu)
Subject: Re: [Nsi-wg] NSI AA document ready to go to public comment
 
Hi all,

Both John and I made a pass to address all the outstanding comments.  We believe this is ready for final review and public comment if the clarification to the comments are satisfactory.

The updated document can be found on Redmine:
https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13536

Thanks!

- Chin 

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On Wed, Jun 29, 2016 at 4:48 AM, Guy Roberts <Guy.Roberts@geant.org> wrote:
Hello All,
 
Thanks to Richard for his second review of the NSI AA document (as well as the review from Jens).  We will address the outstanding issues on today’s NSI call.
 
The marked up AA doc is available here:
https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13424
 
Comments by Richard:
Most of the comments dealt with in a clear manner.

Only two points remain:

1. How does the OE know the path and hence the Auth servers in advance of path computation?

The assumption from John:

“It is my assumption that a user community like LHCONE would use one authorization system and anyone using, or providing resource as part of, would use the same system.” May be valid but it really limits the general use of the standard.

Somewhere in maybe section 7, or the intro, you need to have some lines outlining limitation/assumption and stating that the general case if for future study.

2. OAuth section seems to introduce new terminology.

 
Guy
 
 
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