Hi everyone
I've reviewed section 4, 5, 6 in the document. Have attached
the document (based on v14) with tracking changes (next time can
we do LaTeX please :-))
Some comment with the most controversial stuff:
Some write startTime and other start_time (and similar with
other things). I've corrected most to "start time", however I
think the most important think is consistency, so if someone
feels it should be one over the other, go ahead, but please just
keep it consistent.
Remember this is the CS protocol, not the NSI protocol.
Section 4.2: I've changed the title from provision to
activation, but more importantly changed some text about what to
set start time to if immediate activation is required, so please
review that if you have a bone in that.
Section 5: In general, very short sections, which makes it
seem a bit different. Some of them can probably be joined.
5.4: I have remark about correlationId, I don't think it is
needed at coordinator level, only at the MTL.
5.5: I am not sure what the purpose of the list of timeout
causes is.
I'd merge 5.7 and 5.8
Finally, do we call it "a reservation" or "a connection". We
are not consistent with this at all. My take is that is "a
connection", as a reservation is only a subset of what it is.
There are also quite a few changes and some comments for
section 5. Chin, please review.
/Henrik
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