
It's OK. Thank you. regards, Maciej W dniu 2010-02-15 10:58, Freek Dijkstra pisze:
Paola Grosso wrote:
I leave it up to Paola Grosso, the editor, to decide.
I will make a new version of the document. I will send it to Maciej to see that I actually have correctly updated the text, and to you and Martin (as co-chairs).
I just changed the text and uploaded it to http://forge.gridforum.org/sf/docman/do/viewDocument/projects.nml-wg/docman....
(My apology for overstepping my bounds, since you are the editor, not me. However, I just wanted to get this out).
Maciej, Paola, can you verify these changes are correct?
These were my changes:
End of 4.1:
Was:
The success of cNIS depends upon the efficiency of automatic data collection, population and verification. A plug-in architecture for this is currently under development.
Becomes:
The success of cNIS depends upon the efficiency of automatic data collection, population and verification. cNIS has plug-ins to collect IP, Ethernet and SDH topology information. Plug-ins are continuously improved and user have the possibility to develop their own plug-ins.
Start of 4.4:
Was:
cNIS provides two different types of programmatic interfaces (API): • A management interface for system users to perform various administrative tasks and visualization. • An operational interface for external applications.
Becomes:
cNIS provides one graphic user interface (GUI) and three different types of programmatic interfaces (API): • One graphical user interface, the cNIS manager application to perform administrative tasks and visualization; • Three web service interfaces (topology service, AutoBAHN service and pathfinder) to access the cNIS data repository.
Regards, Freek