Author: zurawski Date: 2010-01-27 07:20:20 -0600 (Wed, 27 Jan 2010) New Revision: 10 Modified: messages.tex nmc-base.pdf Log: Fixing a minor error in section 4, adding more comments to address. -jason Modified: messages.tex =================================================================== --- messages.tex 2010-01-15 13:20:22 UTC (rev 9) +++ messages.tex 2010-01-27 13:20:20 UTC (rev 10) @@ -51,6 +51,18 @@ \item \textbf{Data} - Serves a dual role: in request messages this \textbf{MAY} be empty (e.g. this is a \textit{data trigger}, it lets the service know we need action on the accompanying metadata), or it \textbf{MAY} contain dynamic measurement data or even other metadata elements \end{itemize} +% XXX jz - 1/27/2010 +% +% A comment from Inder: +% +% 2. In Section 4.1, page 7 +% a. I understand the concept behind "rejected outright" but it will good to +% elaborate what that means like "message is discarded and an response +% sent with a corresponding error message". +% +% +% The above text should be altered to address this. + Simply stated, we are sending a request (either partial or complete) to a capable service to perform some interactive behavior. We are interested in having the service verify that it \textbf{MAY} or \textbf{MAY NOT} be able to service our request. We are interested in either setting or retrieving information on this target data set - subsequent operations may be required. When the service receives this request it will check for several things: \begin{itemize} @@ -78,7 +90,7 @@ \end{verbatim} \normalsize -Note this message is similar to the response in many ways. The major differences: +Note this message is similar to the request in many ways. The major differences: \begin{itemize} \item \textbf{Message Type} - This becomes the foil of the previous request; it is common to simply replace the word ``Request'' with ``Response''. Modified: nmc-base.pdf =================================================================== (Binary files differ)