All,

I'm sat on a train so a perfect time to comment on the document...

1) Figure 1 is great now - though it isn't referred to in the text. Perhapse at the end of the paragraph beforehand: "Figure 1 illistrates places where a JSDL document may be used within a Grid environment. It should be noted that the JSDL document should not be limited to just these situations as many others may exist.".

2) First paragraph of section 3: Last scentence:

Many of these languages are currently undefined though they are required for the submission of jobs.

3) Page 8: Job Policy Thus -> This.

4) Page 8: Workflow: Incomplete scentence:
 Many other groups within (and without) the GGF.  -> Many other groups witin (and without) the GGF are already working within this area.

5) Section 3.1 has an [add more text here] element.

6) Page 24: Example of a MoutSource

The filesystem “HOME” must have at most 10GB capacity. The execution system is free to choose an appropriate MountPoint since no value is provided. This should mount the NFS export sputnick.ggf.org:/home/steve

<jsdl:FileSystem name=”jsdl:HOME" >
  <jsdl:Description> Steve’s home </jsdl:Description>
  <jsdl:MountSource>nfs:sputnick.ggf.org/home/steve</jsdl:MountSource>
    <DiskSpace>
      <UpperBoundedRange>10737418240.0</UpperBoundedRange>
    </DiskSpace>
    <jsdl:FileSystemType>jsdl:normal</jsdl:FileSystemType>
  </jsdl:FileSystem>

7) my email is now just asm@doc.ic.ac.uk

That's probably enuf for now.

steve..

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