Hi,

I will try to update the document by tomorrow, given that I hope this is the final cut.

Great - yes I hope so too!

Comments inline, please respond as soon as possible:

- - 2.2.1: could you put an example of correct usage for http://example.com or similar? Ditto for 2.4.2.

[RS] In both sections, the example provided is a quotation from the specification. So I do not think it is appropriate this.

I agree it seems a bit unnecessary but to wrap it up you could just simply add an example (using the documentation prefix 2001:0DB8::/32) RFC2732 compliant IPv6 literal URI for each section.

- - Section 6: See my comment about security considerations for tracker 981. Might the same apply here? Is there a risk from improper specification of use of IP versions?

[RS] Need info on this tracker. How can I get it?

Yes these tracker numbers are a bit cryptic - It's the guidelines doc - here's the tracker they're referring to: https://forge.gridforum.org/tracker/?func=detail&atid=414&aid=981&group_id=90

Shall I send you the final document , and you upload it?

It should be fine for you to upload - using your Gridforge account - if there's any problems just send it to me and I can upload it. Thanks, Piers.

Rute

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